This week I’m hosting critiques for nonwinning adult entrants from Miss Snark’s First Victim’s Baker’s Dozen contest. We have two entries for this. If your post is one of the two, please comment on the other. If
Entry #97
Genre: Fantasy Log Line:Half-human Tel has one chance to outwit her world’s brutal colonists, if she can overcome her dishonorable past, the deadly secret sleeping in her blood, and a handsome star-elemental weaving his own mysterious plots.